the stars theme is brilliant
ditto dim, cant read ramesses vii
maybe bring more red tones into the map via the scarabs, since they are the connectin to the afterlife
i totally forgot about the papyrus font. it looks very egyptian- it just seems a little crowded. however as dim can tell you i pretty much always like very simple fonts, so if others dont have a problem ignore me.
the bonuses font doesnt match the rest of the map, not consistent.
i agree with freezie about the underworld being able to attack everyone- sounds like a major inbalance.
the 1st 2 instructions in the legend are obvious- it is always possible to attack adjacent territories unless there are impassables.
the 4th instruction is somewhat ambiguous, theres probably a better way of wording it but im not sure what it is.
if at all possible i think it would be better to put all the "robber" labels in their respective territories, which may mean adjusting some territory shapes. it would help to differentiate between the robbers and the tombs.
wheres cleopatra?
im not sure how you picked which tombs should be connected to scarabs but it may be good to connect them to famous and/or very important pharohs/kings. for example tutankhamun and hatshepsut.
title needs work
the underworld circle not being centered is annoying, though i know ur trying to fit in the symbol.
you have 2 different versions of the tomb icons, which is nice- but keep all the tombs in a single continent the same version. for example ramesses xi.
make sure words and lines are clearly distinguishable from their backgrounds.
ok cant think of nething else right now